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After reading half of the first book, my first thought was that it read like it bad twihard (hardcore Twilight fan) fan fiction meant for the vanilla spanking set. My second thought was that it was one of the most poorly edited books I've ever read. Every time he touches her breasts, the nipples elongate. Maybe he could roll them between his fingertips until they pebble, stroke them until they peak, pinch them until pucker, lave them until they stiffen. Every time he does something that makes her orgasm, which would be every thing he does because she orgasms if he touches her elbow, some permutation of HOLY COW is voiced by her inner monoloque, which generally takes the form of her "inner goddess." If you can't effectively narrate what is going on inside a character's head, and you resort to the inner goddess, you're just engaging in lazy, sloppy writing. I really wanted to edit the crap out of the book, until I realized I'd have to fix all three books, and I don't do that for free. Imagine my lack of surprise when I discovered that the stories originally started out as Twihard fan fiction, and my absolute horror upon discovering that Vintage was the publisher that had attached itself to this dreck.Vollständige Rezension lesen
Listen I can say it was a good price it arrived in a very timely manner period but the book itself I cannot read because the ink is so light and faded looking, and the print is so small. I would have to use a magnifying glass and I'm an avid reader. So no I'm not happy with the product
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The books were noticeably used but outside of that, they are in a good condition. My girlfriend loves them and that is all that matters.
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I love the books so much more than the movies. My set wasn't returned to me. In stores, this set is expensive. Great value, great description.
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I keep rereading all three of the books they are really good I can't get enough of the books they are good! The last of fifty shades book was my favorite but I really like all three of them
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